Like the day Lily disappeared, I lost all the in between moments of my consciousness – putting on my shoes, getting in the car, driving to the police station. In my mind I’d gone from phone call to bland interrogation room, the fluorescent lighting overhead making my eyes squint. The only two chairs reminded me of the scratchy waiting room kind one would find in a doctor’s office; I sat in one, Detective Mills sat in the other. He folded his hands on the table and stared at a spot on the wall behind my shoulder for a while.
I shifted uncomfortably, like a criminal. Was I about to be accused of something, or told my wife was dead? I bit my lip to avoid asking where other person was, the one who said they knew what happened to her. Finally, Mills opened his mouth and darkness came out.
“Mr. Hamilton, did you kill your wife?”
I blinked several times, trying to remove the spots that had formed in front of my eyes. The small interrogation room had suddenly become a runaway carousel and I gripped the arms of my chair to keep from falling off. I said nothing although my jaw hung loose with shock. If I cried, banged my fists on the table, fell to my knees in despair, would it matter? Like an innocent man accused of rape or abuse, once the accusations take flight he is doomed, forever – guilty or not. The scowls and whispers become infinite. Unless Lily walked into the room right then, Detective Mills had already dubbed me guilty of murder; but I had to defend myself, with whatever piece of soul I had left.
I cleared my throat, raised my eyes to his. “No,” I said, calm, direct. No fireworks, just truth.
“Would you mind if we took a look around your home?”
The invasion had begun.
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18 responses to “Unremembered (Part 5)”
I need the next installment NOW! I’m dying to know what happens! Wonderful writing!
Thank you so much!! Look out for the next one soon! 🙂
I’ve been waiting for this for real, haha :). Can’t wait to read the next part! And I truly didn’t see this coming!
So glad you’re enjoying it!! And I’m happy that little twist was a surprise! 😉
I’m a little curious: do you already have a plan in your head about what is going to happen or do you improvise while writing?
I tend to think about it when I’m not at the computer screen, but I mostly just improvise. My guess is just as good as yours as to how it will all end! 🙂
Hehe, it’s so exciting! 😀
Enjoying this, but we al want more and faster! Haha!
😉 Thank you, lady! That’s just more motivation to get the pace moving!
Awesome. Love it. You’re missing a link to part five at the end of part four. I only knew there was a part five because I saw it on FB at one point. Just a heads up \m/
And thanks for the heads up. Fixing that now! \m/
No prob! I wrote a four part post and forgot to link them together after the fact. The first part had a lot of views. The last part had like, 3. Haha
Bahahaha. Nice. I have no idea how many parts this piece is going to turn into. I’m working on part 6 for now, anyway.
I will keep an eye out for it fa sho.
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Nicole, hurry up, I need more now!!!! Love you both!
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